welcome to deviantart

No wonder nobody comments. :/

You only have one deviation. Before you whine about comments relise the fact you have hardly what you would call a gallery.

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^{Why do I tire of counting sheep
When I'm far too tired to fall asleep}

Looking through your gallery I'd have to say you really need to work on your line quality and confidence in your work. If you know where the line goes there is no need to draw over it 3 more times. If what you wanted was a wider line, I suggest getting a brush pen or something like that in order to have control of the line thickness. Maybe try with a set of varying marker tip sizes of the same colour and switching over when you want broader lines.
Keep at it.

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"Resist the temptation of wheat!"